I am open to constructive criticism or feedback. My plan for the final project is to include some interviews with the Garrison Commander, probably some trooper interviews of "why I joined the 501st" and more charity work, as well as a "how to join the 501st."
LMK what you think, and I hope you like it!
Hi William,
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the video and the music was really amazing. There is a lot of energy throughout your post. I also read your "Who am I?" section and loved it! Your family has a lot of fun and you have a great sense of humor.
I think that the photographs are amazing and you picked a simple layout that is easy to go through.
Awesome job!
Leana Lopez
http://familycanoodle.wordpress.com/
Thanks, Leana. I appreciate it. I do try to have fun with it.
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I agree with Leana- the music is great... For rough this is actually quite good... I think that bringing in the interviews and highlighting the charity work will bring a great depth to the recruiting video
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